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Great!

For a first song, this is awesome! You have some great melodies and chord changes going on in here. Keep it up, you can only get better :)

masterkoopa1015 responds:

thanks, and will get better :)

Oh so dreamy

I'm flooooating....above the seeeeeea...everything's so preeeeeetty...

Very nice song here! I just love the whole feel. But I would've liked to hear that lp'd saw synth throughout the song, with that plunky melody. And the piano seems to be played too hard, I think a softer sound would work better for this piece.

Overall: great chords, great ambience, great textures. Keep it up!

Could be better

First off, welcome to NG! :D
This is a nice tune you have here, I like the contrast between the piano and the techno synths. But it still needs work:

- Make that crowd louder! I'm just not feeling it.
- More layering. It's really thin right now. Get some more stuff happening in the background, like some swooshy effects and cool counter-melodies with distorted leads.
- Run this thing through some compression. Compression = thickness. But make sure you don't overdo it!
- Drum variety. 4-on-the-floor doesn't HAVE to be nothing but kick and hats. Get some crazy snare beats going!

This isn't the best song in the portal, but you're on your way.
- Rig

Lulz

SOMEONE forgot to select "Wrap Remainder". -3 pts! :O
Very happy otherwise.

Distortzion responds:

lalz, i hear it now xD

WOW

It's the best shitty thingy I've ever heard! OMGOMGOMGOMG!

Nice song!

Those drum sounds are awesome. Where did you get them? I liked the piano too, but turn down the reverb a bit.
But overall, it just doesn't feel very tavern-y. I think this would greatly benefit from a bassline, and maybe even an accordion. It just feels too sparse right now.

It has a nice feel, though. Very active. 4/5
- Rig

Yes

it is!

SOUNDS LIKE

YOUR MOM and stuff.
Epic,

oooOOOoOOoOOOOoooo..oo..ooo...staticstatic

This thing sounds like a radio graveyard O.O
I love the creepy feel you have here. What would be even awesomer is if you had an extremely distorted radio talk show going on in the background! :-D

By the way, here's something with kinda the same idea - http://cec.concordia.ca/jttp/2005/ind ex.html - "Noise at 6"

Can't wait to hear more!
- Rig

Duuuuuude

I played the baritone for years! Too bad I don't have one anymore, otherwise we could rock 'n roll all night and party every day. Keep it up! :-D

The finer sound designer.

JP Neufeld @Rig

Age 36, Male

Sound designer

Concordia University

Winnipeg

Joined on 10/29/06

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