Scawy!
It's the beginnings of a great ambient song! I think you could've added more stuff to it, like some abstract synths or something. Also, turn it up - it's pretty quiet.
But yeah, it sounds good. Make it longer!
Scawy!
It's the beginnings of a great ambient song! I think you could've added more stuff to it, like some abstract synths or something. Also, turn it up - it's pretty quiet.
But yeah, it sounds good. Make it longer!
Thanks for the advice :) I'm gonna start working on a longer version (probably make it into a full song).
I remember...
...playing this in my high school jazz band. Brings back fond memories. :)
Good mix, and certainly fits the objectives of the 3 instrument challenge. It sounds kinda thin in the beginning, but you thickened it up with your great piano programming. Keep up the great work!
hey, how that I didn't knew that you were playing in a jazz band ?
thanx for review, actuallywe plan to make a thinner live version, without piano
I've heard also just sax and percussion, that was cool (I guess I'm in a very minimalistic mood these days)
Perfect!
I love it - it's perfect for any lo-fi game or animation. Keep up your awesome work!
A comment!
Sounds like a solid band you have on your hands, but it suffers from poor mixing. The drums and vocals are barely audible, and it sounds like everything but the high hat is in mono. I hear no kick drum at all. Try spreading out your guitars in the mix and keeping the vocals in the center, and turn up your kick drum! Do you have a bass? If so I can't hear it. Post some lyrics, too.
Otherwise sounds like a pretty good song. Just work on those mixing skillz ;P
well the drums are brushes... suppose to be really soft. its just me and a drummer. i do have a few different mixes with vocals. its a very basic recording. drums, one main guitar, and one with licks, and vocals. nothing fancy, suppose to be really gritty haha. thanx for your comment though, ill for sure focus on those on the next few songs.
Automation!
Great start, especially with all the automation you're doing to the bass and the lead. I love just fooling around with 3xOsc!
But there's no bass to speak of, the drums could be worked on (too busy, actually), and it could use some pads. Still, it's a fun little piece. :)
Yeah, it's pretty basic, and I coudn't lower the bass and keep it in G without it sounding like shit, that was a bass VSTi I used for the bass, and not 3xOsc, but the lead was 3xOsc. Yeah, I could mess with it some more, or maybe make a full song out of it, I dunno. Thanks for the review, Rig.
Um...
I'm afraid that any score I could give this song is negated by the fact that it contains a copyrighted sample. :|
Crazy shreds! :O
I always look forward to your entries in the Guitar Challenge thread. I wasn't disappointed this time - great interwoven tones and soloing!
Awesome work! I wish I could critique it more...I'm just not a guitar player. :P
Thanks man! I had fun with this backing track.
Not the best example of Sytrus's power
As a raw demo of Sytrus, this song doesn't do it enough justice. I could make the same sounds with 3xOsc. Get deeper into the program, man! Utilize the envelopes, all that modulation, filters, everything. It can do TONS of stuff.
As a song, yeah, it's pretty generic. But hey, you get points for the effort. :D
Theres alot more it can do. For starters though it gets the point across. You can see this as two point of views. One being you can make simple but whole sounding synthes with less effort. Two being its not very complicated, the matrix can do a ton more.
I agree with everyone including you. It's not the best demonstration if you want a good demonstration go to the FL site they have some nice demos.
Though there are synthes in the song achievable by 3XOsc the quality of that synthe is harder to reach then it is through Sytrus. Little mixing was needed to achieve most of these synthes. I just wanted to show people a fairly nice sounding song could come out of sytrus without using presets or understanding it all.
Once I understand it more I'll make a song comprised of only Sytrus, which means no samples. Thanks for your input and truthful score.
Smooooth
I love the exclusive use of the piano and violins in this song. Very jazzy, and great effects on the drums. What VST did you use for the piano? It sounds great!
Some things that bugged me were the fact that the snares sounded really thin - I think a little more punch was needed. And you say it's loopable, but it doesn't actually loop. haha
Otherwise, it's a great piece and I hope to hear more from you soon!
Hey Rig, thank you so much for your review!
Well piano is a Steinway Grandpiano (soundfont format), with some reverbs :)
Yes, snare sounds really thin but in my opinion it's ok..the melody should prevail in the song.
Loopable means that if an audio artist need this song - looped - i can do that :)
I'm glad about your review, so thanks again.
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Concordia University
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