Great!
For a first song, this is awesome! You have some great melodies and chord changes going on in here. Keep it up, you can only get better :)
Great!
For a first song, this is awesome! You have some great melodies and chord changes going on in here. Keep it up, you can only get better :)
thanks, and will get better :)
Oh so dreamy
I'm flooooating....above the seeeeeea...everything's so preeeeeetty...
Very nice song here! I just love the whole feel. But I would've liked to hear that lp'd saw synth throughout the song, with that plunky melody. And the piano seems to be played too hard, I think a softer sound would work better for this piece.
Overall: great chords, great ambience, great textures. Keep it up!
Could be better
First off, welcome to NG! :D
This is a nice tune you have here, I like the contrast between the piano and the techno synths. But it still needs work:
- Make that crowd louder! I'm just not feeling it.
- More layering. It's really thin right now. Get some more stuff happening in the background, like some swooshy effects and cool counter-melodies with distorted leads.
- Run this thing through some compression. Compression = thickness. But make sure you don't overdo it!
- Drum variety. 4-on-the-floor doesn't HAVE to be nothing but kick and hats. Get some crazy snare beats going!
This isn't the best song in the portal, but you're on your way.
- Rig
Lulz
SOMEONE forgot to select "Wrap Remainder". -3 pts! :O
Very happy otherwise.
lalz, i hear it now xD
WOW
It's the best shitty thingy I've ever heard! OMGOMGOMGOMG!
Yes
it is!
SOUNDS LIKE
YOUR MOM and stuff.
Epic,
oooOOOoOOoOOOOoooo..oo..ooo...staticstatic
This thing sounds like a radio graveyard O.O
I love the creepy feel you have here. What would be even awesomer is if you had an extremely distorted radio talk show going on in the background! :-D
By the way, here's something with kinda the same idea - http://cec.concordia.ca/jttp/2005/ind ex.html - "Noise at 6"
Can't wait to hear more!
- Rig
The finer sound designer.
Age 37, Male
Sound designer
Concordia University
Winnipeg
Joined on 10/29/06