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Slayer?

You're right - you aren't the best at FL. But this is still a darn listenable track. You have some glisses and other nice little touches like that, but it needs more mastering. It's all at the same freakin' volume...get some crescendos happening!
More layers would be nice, too. Get some ambient stuff going on, and please please please get more drums. I'm just not feeling it.
Also, Slayer kinda sucks. :\

You're well on your way! It's a good mix, but it just needs more.
- Rig

jrayteam6 responds:

Your right your right, the new version of this track has been rebuild almost from the ground up, this was my first sort of.... aggressive epic attempt, hence my pathetic 5 hour time frame. Things have come a long way since this track... but slayer.... your stepping on my game man, this is one of my original setups, and its definatley nothing to what I've done latley... just trying to redeem myself. Anways, thanks for the thoughts, I'll try to get the full version up here.

Great!

For a first song, this is awesome! You have some great melodies and chord changes going on in here. Keep it up, you can only get better :)

masterkoopa1015 responds:

thanks, and will get better :)

Oh so dreamy

I'm flooooating....above the seeeeeea...everything's so preeeeeetty...

Very nice song here! I just love the whole feel. But I would've liked to hear that lp'd saw synth throughout the song, with that plunky melody. And the piano seems to be played too hard, I think a softer sound would work better for this piece.

Overall: great chords, great ambience, great textures. Keep it up!

Could be better

First off, welcome to NG! :D
This is a nice tune you have here, I like the contrast between the piano and the techno synths. But it still needs work:

- Make that crowd louder! I'm just not feeling it.
- More layering. It's really thin right now. Get some more stuff happening in the background, like some swooshy effects and cool counter-melodies with distorted leads.
- Run this thing through some compression. Compression = thickness. But make sure you don't overdo it!
- Drum variety. 4-on-the-floor doesn't HAVE to be nothing but kick and hats. Get some crazy snare beats going!

This isn't the best song in the portal, but you're on your way.
- Rig

Lulz

SOMEONE forgot to select "Wrap Remainder". -3 pts! :O
Very happy otherwise.

Distortzion responds:

lalz, i hear it now xD

WOW

It's the best shitty thingy I've ever heard! OMGOMGOMGOMG!

Yes

it is!

SOUNDS LIKE

YOUR MOM and stuff.
Epic,

oooOOOoOOoOOOOoooo..oo..ooo...staticstatic

This thing sounds like a radio graveyard O.O
I love the creepy feel you have here. What would be even awesomer is if you had an extremely distorted radio talk show going on in the background! :-D

By the way, here's something with kinda the same idea - http://cec.concordia.ca/jttp/2005/ind ex.html - "Noise at 6"

Can't wait to hear more!
- Rig

The finer sound designer.

JP Neufeld @Rig

Age 37, Male

Sound designer

Concordia University

Winnipeg

Joined on 10/29/06

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